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Review #4735991
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 Wonderland Again. Open in new Window. [ASR]
another trip down the rabbit hole...
by Pumpkin Spice Sox Author Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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What a race! With Obama, Trump, and Clinton in it running and Trump changing directions every five steps I'd be hesitant to race along as well. Glad to see some familiar faces. I would be like to be on the side doing a review like Megan. Annette is brave. Beacon is like a leader to those children. Gaby is leading a contest preparation and a warning from buddhangela. I would heed the warning too and run away from the race as well.

Good details. Characters are captured nicely. The race is in a nonsense way. I wonder who would be the winner. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!

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