Hello Sumojo!

This blog post of yours was in the post before mine in "I Write in 2024," so I'm here to do your review. I hope you enjoy it and find it encouraging and uplifting.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
Your blog post felt emotional, powerful and authentic to me as I read it and afterwards as I considered it! Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I wish you hadn't had that horrible teacher! What a terrible way to treat an impressionable child. My heart goes out to you.


Even though it was many year later, once you realized the truth about yourself, you took so much positive action! Instead of wallowing in bitterness and blaming that teacher for the rest of your life, you earned multiple degrees, ran successful businesses and discovered a true love for learning! I applaud you! Very well done!


Your last two sentences really summed up your piece well and ended it with power. Words really do matter. Teachers have a lot more power than most people realize. Well done!


I liked the quote that you started your post with. I wondered if it was a solo quote prompt or if you had multiple choices and chose that one.


I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your blog post. Well done!


Your blog post was interesting to me, felt like it was coming straight from your heart and soul, and made me want to hug little girl you and undo all the negative programming that teacher did. You deserved better.



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's perfect as it is. Well done!



CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and your emotions and can-do spirit shined through this blog post. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler









A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .