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 THUNDERSTORM Open in new Window. [E]
Poetry in Action
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings,

Another great poem. I would have loved your portfolio as a kid. You have captured the essence of a thunderstorm in words, from the ferocity of the lightning and roar of thunder to the cool peace of the sudden rain.

If you wrote this for a contest, it would be useful to link to the contest page on your item for future reference, and you can also list the prompt you were writing to.

If this is purely spontaneous, then just ignore me *Laugh*

Your meter is eye-catching as it flows from structure down to a chaotic line of descriptive words and then settles back into structure at the end.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Smile* *Lightning3*


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