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 Year of the Dragon Open in new Window. [E]
This is a metaphor for a huge fire that burned not far from my home in 2017
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and happy account anniversary!

I love a good rhyming poem, and this is splendid. I would perhaps have memorized it when I was a kid. It would look quaint written out in fancy script and tacked to the wall on an old scroll.

It's perfect for kids, telling a classic tale of a fiery dragon and its defeat by the cold of winter. Your meter is free flowing and enjoyable to read, and the story has a beginning, middle and end that doesn't feel constrained by the rhymes.

I don't usually have much to criticize about poetry, and I can't find anything here. As someone who doesn't bother with counting syllables or knowing the difference between trochees and iambic pentameter, I am perfectly unqualified to tell you how to measure your meter *Laugh*

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Smile* *DragonHeadR*


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