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 | Whirring  [13+] Sitting at my desk at work looking around wishing the day would end....  |
| (5.0)   Hallo! This one showed up on 'Read and Review'. The title and brief description are interesting, but what really got me curious was the combination of 'genres' you picked! I love the poem. The tone, verse structure and words chosen make it hum just like the whirring you speak of. The images you conjure up are powerful and relatable, and it's brilliant how you weave them into a thought process about dreary existence. I like all of it, but my favourites are the bits about someone else's headphones and procrastination. No suggestions - it's great as it is. Write On Sonali  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 03/11/2024 @ 3:37pm EDT