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 Speaking Ground Open in new Window. [E]
My attempt at trancedentalist poetry... if it even counts as either of those.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A cute little poem, telling of picnics by a cabin. As someone who has enjoyed more than a few such picnics, it makes me think of my youth, and makes me long for those easier times of my childhood, when my parents, siblings, and I would enjoy spending time together, and makes me wish that I had such days back. I remember a day when we had a picnic in the middle of winter - that was fun.

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A very cute poem to read. Takes me back to my childhood

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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