First Impression: An incredible thing happening at the waste disposal factory hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the character builds the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like this part because it emphasized the fact that it is up to human beings to take care of the ocean.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of its message about the environment.
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