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 Underworld Visitor Open in new Window. [13+]
Round 29 - April - Dark Dreamscapes Contest
by đź’™ Carly-wrimo 2024 Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings,

Wow, that’s quite a poem you’ve created with the image prompt. I love the final punchline of her being a writer. It means a lot to me, because I know how it is to plumb the scary depths of places in search of something. It may not even have been connected to writing at the time, but when the time comes to write, I am well equipped. I strive for objectivity and try to be nonjudgmental as I see the struggles of others. I also have to try hard to not let anything bother me, and writing is a good way to filter stressful experiences.

Anyway… I don’t have much to criticize here. The poetry flows smoothly and paints an unforgettable picture better than the prompt image. You’ve formatted it well and added all the appropriate context for it. I would suggest adding three relevant genres now that it’s no longer a contest entry. “Death,” “Supernatural” and “Fantasy” would be suitable.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile*


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