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 A Garden Rejuvinates  Open in new Window. [18+]
Zayda's aunt comes to explore the garden and they are visited by the ghost of her uncle.
by 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024 Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Greetings,

I really enjoyed reading this snapshot from your novel. It paints a clear and fascinating portrait of the family and their interactions and hints at amazing adventures to come. I don’t usually read much fantasy, but this urban style one sounds good enough for me to seek out the rest of it.

The descriptions are great and there was plenty of showing rather than telling. My only suggestion, other than running it through Grammarly for some minor errors, would be to use size 4 Verdana font to make it easier to read.

I liked how it stands on its own yet builds up what’s already there in your novel. It makes a good story for the contest.

Thanks for sharing , take care and keep writing *Smile* *Heartb*


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