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 Chance of a Lifetime Open in new Window. [E]
When you favourite musician finds you.
by đź’™ Carly-wrimo 2024 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings and happy account anniversary month!

I enjoyed reading this piece of affectionate fan fiction. The two different perspectives are engaging; I guessed right away that it was probably Alessia Cara (a Canadian) escaping to the beautiful Canadian countryside in the beginning. I can tell you’re a Canada resident as well; your appreciation for your land’s natural beauty shines through. (That and the maple leaf on your blue case *Laugh*)

Your descriptions are apt and paint the different scenes well, from the peace and stillness of the country to the crowded, noisy, slightly bawdy bar. Dani’s hopes and dreams are evident as she pours herself into her creations, and we cheer for her as she meets her role model, who grants her a miraculous opportunity.

I would suggest using size 4 Verdana font for your items to ensure readability across devices.

I am not exactly a fan of Alessia Cara, but I do appreciate her style and commitment to writing her own songs for the most part. I can usually tell when someone writes their own lyrics… that one about the party is so relatable. (Here.)

Thanks for sharing, good luck on the contest *Wink* take care and keep writing *Smile* *Music2*


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