Hello MJones!

Welcome to Writing.Com! I thought I'd give you a welcoming review and I hope you enjoy it and find it encouraging and uplifting.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I loved your spiritual inspirational poem! Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I loved the unifying message of your spiritual poem. We are all connected and leading with love is very wise and compassionate. Well done!


My favorite lines were the last two:
"For the more we can lead with love instead
the more it will grow and strengthen the thread." I think they were my favorite because of them being an excellent ending to your lovely poem and because of their message and how it brought everything full circle. Well done!


I loved your use of rhyming in your spiritual poem. It made it feel nice as I read it. Well done!


I love that you reminded me and all future readers to "lead with love." Well done!


I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your spiritual poem. Well done!


Your poem was interesting to me, felt like it was coming straight from your heart and soul, and made me feel connected to you spiritually so I said a prayer of blessing for you. Well done!



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's lovely as it is. Well done!



CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and heart for humanity and I enjoyed reading your poem. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler








A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .