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 Mr. Starr Open in new Window. [E]
Testifying in court, I trip up the defense attorney, Mr. Starr.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, sir,

This was quite an amusing little read. You’ve captured the essence of a quick exchange and made us chuckle without any unnecessary details. I’ve seen anecdotes similar to this on YouTube montages of Twitter conversations; I believe there are whole videos of tweets of courtroom banter.

Perhaps a note that it’s flash fiction would be helpful in the subtitle so we know what we’re getting into, but a quick scroll down the page usually suffices. As with my previous review of an item of yours, I don’t have any suggestions for improvement.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile*


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