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Juniper Park Open in new Window. [13+]
Nah, a campground with such a nice name could never scar someone for life.
by Davy Kraken Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Greetings and happy account anniversary month!

A funny read about your camping trip as a young person with a fear of spiders. I enjoyed it. The descriptions are deftly written and really it hardly felt exaggerated at all. I’ve seen highway rest stops that were in similar shape *Laugh*

I would suggest using size 4 Verdana font to ensure readability across devices. Also perhaps a bit of dialogue among the characters would help make it more interesting, rather than a journalistic monologue. But whatever you like, since it’s autobiographical.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Smile*


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