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Review #4735020
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 Contest Entries Open in new Window. [13+]
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by Angelica Weatherby- Bday mom15 Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "A Second Friend" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi, Angelica Weatherby- Bday mom15 Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Contest Entries" Open in new Window. "A Second Friend" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Joe taking Zoe with him. The conversation and interaction among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part is the lesson this story taught. I like that part because it emphasized supporting your friends.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson it taught.

Write on!


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