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A Question of Hearing Open in new Window. [13+]
A need for auditory amplification devices, or institutional confinement
by Joey' Falling for the Season Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings and happy account anniversary, Joey!

Good grief, this is hilarious. I would have cracked up laughing out loud but I'm sitting right next to Mom and she'd think I've lost my mind.

Is this seriously autobiographical? If so, I'm rather glad you didn't go into the medical field, as it would have been challenging.

I would recommend adding a third genre, perhaps "Medical" or "Entertainment." Other than that I don't have much to offer for this comedic piece. The characters are amusing, your interactions are deft and the writing flows well, with the wordplay keeping us on our toes as we wonder what in the world is going on and where this is leading.

Thanks for sharing this rollicking bit of fun, take care and keep writing *Smile* *Doctor*


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