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It's Michigan Open in new Window. [E]
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Review of It's Michigan  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and happy accidents anniversary!

What a chilly and perfectly concentrated poem. Every word builds that feeling of bleak, sharp cold, from the scattered pine boughs to the hapless squirrel. I’m shivering *Laugh*

Perhaps a separate section showing what happens when the weather warms up by the end of the day and starts turning mushy and slushy would be a nice addition.

Other than that I don’t have any suggestions. This is well written and memorable.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Smile* *Heartt*


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