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 Just 5 More Minutes Open in new Window. [E]
Sleepy little limerick.
by Pinterra Author Icon
Review by Sophurky Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings!

I came across your limerick as part of the random review page, and I'm glad I did. *Smile* I enjoy limericks, and yours is nicely done.

Interesting combination of genres (Horror/Scary with Comedy)! Horror/Scary made me reconsider that last line as something possibly more sinister...

Your meter and rhyming are well done. One suggestion for line 2 - I wonder if you'd consider reversing the first two words?

Yet didn't turn around

instead of

Didn't yet turn around

Just a thought to take or leave.

Write on! *Smile*


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