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Given: Feb 28, 2024 at 2:38am
Length: 614 Characters |
560 w/o WritingML
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What an amazing insight into sports! While the basics are universally known - there is a price to pay for glory, there is perspiration and inspiration - your way of saying it makes one see it afresh. I had an aha moment with the 'need' giving rise to an 'action' which may then be great.
The rhyme scheme and verse structure work well. The use of words is unusual and the internal rhymes add to the impact.
My only suggestion is for WritingML - font, size, line space, center.
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