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What's There to Do Tonight, Anyway?  [E]
Original Contemporary Poetry
by Boulden Shade (fka Jeff Meyer)
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow!
I visited your portfolio because your WDC anniversary is coming up. The title and cover pic caught my attention, so I clicked here.

Wow.

I must say it wasn't at all what I was expecting! I thought it would be a sort of list poem of rejected pastimes.

Instead, I found some vivid imagery that moved at a rapid pace, causing me to get slightly breathless as I tried to keep up with your thoughts and insights! Great job!

A special shout out to the first line, reminiscent of Walt Whitman.

Tiny suggestion - WritingML - font, line spce, type size.

I'll feature this one in the Spiritual Newsletter on Feb 28.

Write On!
- Sonali


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