Hello Steven Gepp!

Thanks again for the beta reader opportunity on this urban dragon novel of yours. I just finished reading these two chapters, so I'm here to do your review. I hope you enjoy it and find it encouraging and uplifting.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I enjoyed these three short chapters and am looking forward to the next installment. Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Everything seems to flow well and make sense so far. Well done!

I'm eager to have a dragon make an appearance. I wonder if the mysterious woman is a dragon shifter?

I didn't notice any spelling mistakes in your three chapters. Well done!


Your story chapters were interesting to me, and made me want to read your next one. Well done!



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's nicely done as it is. Well done!


CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and I easily got drawn into the story. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .