The title works. You've repeated the title for the brief description, maybe you'd like to change the brief description ... ?
I enjoyed the poem about a true love story. The layout and the way the lines break are especially innovative. I also like how you give the prompt at the end of the poem, so we have context.
Suggestions:
1. I had to think a few seconds before I remembered that 'ESL' stands for English as a second language. Maybe you'd like to just say 'English' ... ?
2. Somehow for me 'meeting fate' could be interpreted either in a happy way or in a sinister way! But I guess that's just me personally. Thought I'd let you know.
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