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Your Poem  [13+]
I'll immortalize you.
by Erika
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Phew!
What images flashed across my mind as I read this one!
In a few simple, well-chosen words, you've painted a picture of the darker side of a 'loving' relationship. The pacing is perfect. The last line had me wondering, and I haven't decided what exactly it implies.

My suggestion would be for WritingML - font, size, line space.

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- Sonali

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