I stumbled onto this in the review section and can't pass the change to tell you what I think. As usual I will count the syllables and look for an error. Well it sounds like you are here in Vermont with and coming down the hill on skis. You would really get scared here. Syllable count is correct and there is rhythm, thanks to the rhyme scheme then as far as imagery I felt the cold and took that snow plow with you as I have often
done before, when I was much younger found no errors.