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 |  | Why I Joined WDC  [E] Yeah, this pretty much sums it all up  |
| (4.5)| Hi Jim. I'm reviewing Why I Joined WDC today for I Write 2024. Blurb: I'm cutting this short for you. I hope you know already that I aim to give comments and suggestions without judgement, and that I love to teach but admit I'm not an expert on anything (or at least I try to admit it).  Impressions: I loved this story of your time on WDC and the strong connections you've made. It's fitting, too, that much of your focus is on the members of WDC you've managed to meet "In Real Life" since your travels for your job have given you those opportunities. I think that's something that sets you apart from a great many of us on WDC, because you have built some true, lasting friendships. I think it makes you a special and valuable member of WDC and I love that it's included in this item. (I know you didn't write this with the intention of telling everyone what makes you special.  I just wanted to give you my opinion on the content since this is for the I  WDC Contest. Mechanics/Formatting: Including the photos of meetings you've had with other members makes this even more personal and endearing. I love the photos. My only wish is that each photo had a caption of who is in the photo in which order (i.e. "left to right, Schnujo's Doing NaNoWriMo?  , NaNoNette  , etc.") But I'm pretty quick, I think I figured out who's who. Just one quick typo of note: It looks like you might have some overlapping ML which is causing the very first {indent} to be visible. I think maybe your {size} tag overlaps, because the second curly bracket looks bigger. Should be an easy fix once you locate it. Take-Away: This is a great entry to the I Love WDC contest. I love your approach to it–focusing on the people who matter to you rather than writing. My writing has improved since I've been here also, but I'm also of the belief that it's the relationships and the community I've found on WDC that keeps me here. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your craft. I wish you all the best in your writing (and other) pursuits! Good luck with the contest and continuing with I Write 2024. Of course, write on! ~Angie     My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 02/26/2024 @ 9:39pm EST