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 A Golf Hazard Open in new Window. [E]
This poem of mishap and mirth was inspired by the prompt "I can't say".
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Review of A Golf Hazard  Open in new Window.
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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'A Golf Hazard' is simply a great rhyming poem which is written by a newbie poet. The poem proves that a poet cannot be categorized as a newbie poet or an experienced poet. A great poet must show his class from the beginning. That poet proves the same once again.
The subject of this poem is nothing but mishap and mirth inspired by the prompt "I can't say".
He can create suspense and a mysterious environment and all other characteristics of an ideal short story. That proves that he can be a good short story writer, too.
Due to the suspense and good pace, it gets awesome readability.
Overall, it is a brilliant beginning. Continue this performance.

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