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Fruit to Bread Open in new Window. [E]
A nonsense poem about banana bread.
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Review of Fruit to Bread  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, NaNotatoGo! Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Fruit to Bread" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The second verse is my favorite because the questions made me laugh.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this funny poem because it made me laugh.

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