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 | Happy Birthday  [E] Monty and Jacqui's Birthday  |
| (4.0)| Greetings, TheBusmanPoet . I'm Jace, and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Happy Birthday" for the "~ The Poet's Place Cafe~" group.   Form.Initially, I thought your poem following an a-b-c-b rhyming pattern. But a couple of stanzas didn't follow this pattern.  Overall Impression. I enjoyed reading your poem. It's always fun to read about cats (or other animals) being saved. My wife is partial to cats, and has saved a number of them over the years.I stumbled over reading the following line: It cost the lives of our Mama and Jack so they wouldn’t be euthanized, Perhaps you can explain the meaning of this line.  Technical or Editorial Considerations. I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your poem.  Your first line has an incorrect word usage: Monty and Jacqui we’re Monty and Jacqui were Rating. 4.0.  Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinions.Reviewed by JACE  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" . My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 02/23/2024 @ 12:00pm EST