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 Dust My Book  [E]
We all have a book that is written of us. My book is dark, that I will bring to light.
by jayesandz
Review of Dust My Book  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

I'm happy to find another poem from you on the Read a Newbie sidebar; I like your writing style and will probably be checking out your port soon.

A simple poem comparing our lives to a book and inviting readers to take a peek at the painful realities that lie within its dusty pages.

We all have issues that we've faced, some that we've overcome and others which threaten to overcome us. You've laid out the different phases of light and dark and described things in a clear and readable way. My favorite couplet is "A page of me, when I felt the proudest,
Ends a time, I cried the loudest." I know how that feels. This is a very relatable poem, with "poetic" language that doesn't get too specific.

I think it would make a good song. You can submit this to several poetry contests around WdC, as long as you remember to include a line count. Current contests can be found by looking in the Community tab on the left sidebar and clicking on "contests."

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *Smile* *Heartb*


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