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DO NOT ANNOY THE UNMEDICATED PERSON  [18+]
Law school tales of weirdness and woe with a twist
by Tangled in Ghostly Witch-Webs
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Tangled in Ghostly Witch-Webs .

I'm Polter-JACE: Cruising ... , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "DO NOT ANNOY THE UNMEDICATED PERSON" .

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. I noticed that you are enjoying a real birthday today, and thought I'd send you a review. A search through your Port revealed this humorous gem. I love a little comedy in one's real-life struggles.

One of the four majors I embraced my freshman year of college was Political Science, bent on Pre-Law. (Someday soon I'll write about that stage in my life.) I took a Constitutional Law course on which I spent twice as much time studying than my other classes together. I garnered a C, highest in the class. The Prof boasted he never gave A's or B's. What an A**!

I applaud you for pursuing your Law degree, no matter what it took to accomplish. While I have a great imagination, all I can do is imagine how much pressure a law student, or any advanced degree student has to succeed.

I never had occasion to use anything more potent that marijuana--well, there was one time someone got hold of some Hash (and I don't mean Libby's). Suffice it to say college was more than 50 years ago and I'll still a well-rounded, intelligent, funny and successful guy. Self-medication made me who I am today. *Wink*

I wonder if the use of humor is a form of medication. I enjoyed reading your life's vignette. You have a great grasp on humor in writing. Are you writing them down for your family?

I'm sure I'll return for more soon. And you must have been successful--after all, you wound up here.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* I found no issues with your writing mechanics. Perhaps it was college and law school that taught you to writ. Or, just spending time with us here.   

*Thumbsup* Favorite Part. If I'd only had the courage to do this once or twice.

  I reached over to give her a swift whack on the side of her foggy brained head. Okay, stop crying out “battery,” or should I say the much-misused label “assault,” for those of you addicted to crime shows. She never saw it coming! Well, she perked up, turned to face me, and said, “Thank you, I needed that.”

*Star* My Rating.  5.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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JACE

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