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Zoological Reflections  [E]
An unusual zoological exhibit.
by Beholden
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Beholden .

I'm Polter-JACE: Cruising ... , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Zoological Reflections" .

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. This is one of the most unusual and interesting stories I've read in a long time. It really makes one think about one's situation--do I really have the freedom I believe I have.

It was interesting to read the repartee between the two parties, each trying to convince the other that their situation was real. Based on the discussion, it's hard to refute either story.

Your dialogue definitely moved your story along. And you really hit the "nonsense" nail on the head.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* I found no issues to mention with this section.    

*Star* My Rating.  4.5. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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JACE

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