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Review #4732452
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 Like it Taboo? Click Here ;)  [GC]
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by Elisa: Stik or Treat
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Rated: GC | (4.0)
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An Angel Army Review


Hi Elisa: Stik or Treat .

I'm Polter-JACE: Cruising ... , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Like it Taboo? Click Here ;)" , which I found on the Read & Review feature.

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. I was rather surprised to see this particular piece come up in the Read & Review precisely for the age of the item and the last time is was modified (2006). I have a number of items in my Port that are pretty old and in need of updating. Time--that is the problem.

I decided to review it only to bring this piece to your attention. Yes, I realize you may already know about this item (and others that need updating).

That said, I believe in items that promote specific aspects and genres on WDC. New members may not realize that items, forums and groups for a given genre even exists. This item provides that.

What makes such an item so difficult is the passage of time often renders the information contained within moot. One can spend so much time updating that new writing seldom happens.

I can't answer whether updating this item will have the value you hope for it, or if it should just be deleted. Only you can do that.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* "One Stop Erotica Shop!" : This item is an inactive message forum that is hosted by a member who has not been online on WDC in more than ten years. As a member who places a heavy emphasis the Erotica genre, I realize how few forums and groups there are.    

         *Bullet* You also have an Invalid Link listed.   

*Star* My Rating.  4.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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JACE

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