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Reaper Academy: Book One Open in new Window. [E]
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Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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The chapter can be divided into three parts. In the first part, the writer describes the beauty of Tekal where he inputs the sense of a poet to describe nature. How beautiful it is!
In another portion, Articus shows his natural talent when he is with Nina on a free day. He bought a costly gift, as per Nina'sopinion, for Nina which is unexpected for a slave. In reality, Articus wanted to establish the forever truth that every human should have an equal right to live in the world.
Thirdly, Articus did not give the required honour to Guinavev. It was very dramatic. So, the 'Drama' genre should be applied.
In the modern era, genres can be changed chapter-wise. You may also follow that.
The style of writing is awesome. Continue this form.


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