Hello Dr. Jeffyll, or Mr. Hyde? !

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month, Jeff! I marked this post during the year to come back to and review during your anniversary month, and I'm glad I did. It definitely deserves a review! I hope you enjoy this celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.



INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I enjoyed your personal essay about decluttering and think you did a great job writing it. Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I could really relate to a lot of what you shared here and plan to take your advice and watch an episode of Hoarders before my next big decluttering session. Thank you! Well done!


If you have a follow up to this essay, I'd love to read it. Please share the link. Did you succeed in decluttering? Are you and your wife happy with the results? What was the hardest part for each of you?

Kudos on hitting "307% of the NaNo target (according to the NaNo website)!" What a great achievement! Well done! Was that your best NaNo year?

I liked all the questions you shared that you gleaned from the Hoarders episodes. If someone is stuck in their decluttering process, they'd be great ones to ask. Well done!

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your personal essay. Well done!

Your personal essay was interesting to me, felt like it was coming straight from your heart and brain, and made me want to read your next one. Well done!



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's literally perfect as it is. Well done!



CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and your essay felt very conversational and relatable. I enjoy reading your blog posts and other writings all year, whether I have time for a review or not. You are a wonderful member here and writer in general. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, community spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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