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Review #4732223
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 Inspired by Hoarders  [13+]
A personal essay about decluttering.
by Dr. Jeffyll, or Mr. Hyde?
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*



Hello Dr. Jeffyll, or Mr. Hyde? !

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month, Jeff! I marked this post during the year to come back to and review during your anniversary month, and I'm glad I did. It definitely deserves a review! I hope you enjoy this celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.



INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
*Bulletg* I enjoyed your personal essay about decluttering and think you did a great job writing it. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulletg* You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done! *Clap*



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

*Bulleto* I could really relate to a lot of what you shared here and plan to take your advice and watch an episode of Hoarders before my next big decluttering session. Thank you! Well done! *Clap*


*Bulleto* If you have a follow up to this essay, I'd love to read it. Please share the link. *Smile* Did you succeed in decluttering? Are you and your wife happy with the results? What was the hardest part for each of you?

*Bulleto* Kudos on hitting "307% of the NaNo target (according to the NaNo website)!" What a great achievement! Well done! *Clap* Was that your best NaNo year?

*Bulleto* I liked all the questions you shared that you gleaned from the Hoarders episodes. If someone is stuck in their decluttering process, they'd be great ones to ask. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your personal essay. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* Your personal essay was interesting to me, felt like it was coming straight from your heart and brain, and made me want to read your next one. Well done! *Clap*



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's literally perfect as it is. Well done! *Clap*



CONCLUSION:
*Bulletv* You have a great writing style and your essay felt very conversational and relatable. I enjoy reading your blog posts and other writings all year, whether I have time for a review or not. You are a wonderful member here and writer in general. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulletv* Thank you for sharing your time, community spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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