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by quiet web
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hi quiet web .

I'm Polter-JACE: Cruising ... , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "reading list" , which I found on the Read & Review feature.

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. My initial thought was should I even review this. I realize items and appear on this feature are from authors who are online at that time. But then I figure that you took the time to create the item--you must have a reason for doing that.

Actually, I think this item is a rather bold statement. I also would like a bit more context to really justify it. Your first six lines are capitalized. It's easy to assume they are book titles. The remaining lines are not capitalized. Are they really book titles? Or, are they just descriptions of some sort?

Since I'm unfamiliar with any of the titles, I wonder what genre they are from, and who the author's might be. That would be the context I spoke of earlier.

Still as a list keeper myself, I understand the need and wisdom of creating such a list.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* I've nothing to include in this section.    

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. With more context I would have rated it better than a 3.0 average rating. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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