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Reaper Academy: Book One Open in new Window. [E]
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Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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There are a few Adjustments done here in the story. I especially like these. These make the story more interesting. There is no doubt about it.
The chapter is surrounded by Articus and Celia. Their relationship becomes complicated. Will it reach the proper destination where their love waits? Or that will go to the other destination? We can not predict it at this moment. All possibilities are wide open.
The style of delivery is majestic and very lively. Suppose we directly witness everything. The Application of Fantasy is truly amazing. But everything revolves around the main purpose, the prominent similarities between the slave and their honours. Will Aricus give leadership in this memorable revolt? Being a real hero, he should lead from the front. But we do not know what will happen.
There are some more questions on my mind. The most important of them is how much that revolt affects his love. If we want to know the answer, we should read the story carefully.
It becomes more increasing in every chapter. Therefore, I am waiting for the next chapter.


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