This is a great short story. The short description was very cryptic. I wasn't sure how it would play out so it was an exciting read. I actually thought it might go south the way "Nan" described her fear of the winter but it actually turned out to be a sweet story.

You really did a great job with setting up the environment and scene making it very easy to visualize what was happening. I really got a great picture of the winter the town, Nan etc. They were very subtle touches that added life to the scene. The description of the hound, the fire, the supper Nan was eating all and winter itself all served to enhance the story. The two characters had personality and seemed lifelike. Great Writing!



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