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 One of Them Open in new Window. [E]
A poem I wrote for school a year ago about joining a cult
by Ra Morgan Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

A brief and carefully written poem, with a distinct style and tone. You’ve conveyed your thoughts on the subject in a striking way, though I’m not sure what I would have made of it if you hadn’t mentioned cults in the subtitle.

I would recommend selecting two other relevant genres, to make it easier to find when browsing and also to increase your chances of being nominated for a Quill Award. Also, I usually recommend using size 4 and/or Verdana font to ensure readability across devices.

I don’t generally have much to criticize when it comes to poetry, especially free verse. I consider poetry to be a highly subjective art form; as long as the idea is conveyed with sincerity and care, it doesn’t matter much if the lines scan or the syllables count properly… to be honest, I’m too lazy to bother writing poems that way myself, so I would have no idea how to critique someone else’s work *Laugh* I just wing it with a vague sense of rhythm.

This is a great poem as it stands, I wouldn’t change anything.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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