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February is a Busy Month  [E]
Valentines, Superbowls, and more!
by ScaryBee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello StephBee!

I saw this fun word search of yours featured in my news feed today and had a good time playing it so decided to give you a review. I hope you enjoy it and find it encouraging and uplifting.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
*Bulletg* I loved the bee image you used as the highlight for your word search game! It's so cheerful and goes well with your handle. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulletg* You kept me riveted and I played straight through to the end, until I found every last word. Well done! *Clap*



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

*Bulleto* I don't think I realized how many things were going on this month. Wow! It is a very busy month for all busy bees. *Smile* Well done! *Clap*


*Bulleto* I enjoyed the theme of your word search game.


*Bulleto* I appreciated that you had both short and long clues for variety. Well done! *Clap*


*Bulleto* I liked your Valentine thumbnail image. Well done! *Clap*


*Bulleto* I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your word search game. Well done! *Clap*


*Bulleto* Your poem was interesting to me, felt like it was coming straight from your heart and soul, and made me want to read your next one. Well done! *Clap*



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I have just one little note to help ... I think this year is a leap year, so we actually have 29 days this month (instead of the normal 28). So maybe, if you felt like editing this piece, you could change the 28 to 29 (or, if you want to make it evergreen, 28 or 29) in this sentence: "There's a lot to pack into a 28 day month." Not a biggie and it won't influence my rating. I really enjoyed your word search puzzle game. *Smile*



CONCLUSION:
*Bulletv* You composed a fun and informative word search puzzle game. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulletv* Thank you for sharing your time, heart, fun spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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