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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Good song choice! It is romantic and very uplifting. Your opinion on the song is right on. It does have a good beat. Love the details that you put into it. It is short and to the point. The lyrics is fast paced but I can understand every word said. Once more you do a great job explaining without giving too much information away. I like that. In the end you mention the lyrics inspire you. While this part can be expanded a little, I'm curious if it makes you feel like you could do anything as you listen. Maybe motivation to write or something. No grammar or spelling errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!

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