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How To: Portfolio [Manage Items]  [E]
Your made-easy guide on how to manage items in your portfolio.
by GERVicious Ghoul ☬
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi GERVicious Ghoul ☬ .

I'm Polter-JACE: Cruising ... , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "How To: Portfolio [Manage Items]"  as submitted to "WDC L'il Helper Contest"  .

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. Thank you for taking time to prepare a submission to my contest.

"Writing.Com 101"  is a fabulous Reference Guide for all WDC members. But, like tax publications, there is always some small aspect that needs further explanation. That's the premise for "The File Cabinet"  (FC). I seek short, specific How-To items that explain the significance of a small part of the larger picture.

Your chosen topic, How To - Portfolio [Manage Items], is a valid topic for the FC. But I found it daunting to follow and not easy to navigate as written. And I'm a member who has used this feature before. I wonder how a new member might fare. A few suggestions follow:

Your opening is good--you focus on Manage Items, which is a great subject. I like your use of color to help identify particular aspects of the text. But it's a complicated topic to follow.

Clicking on the gear icon beside the Portfolio heading will expand, not collapse, into several sub-headers. Also, mention that an error message will be displayed when an action is unable to be completed. The error must be fixed before you can continue.

I do know what I'm suggesting here, and the complexity for its success. Perhaps each sub-topic should be a stand-alone entry in which every potential situation can be explained.

Obviously this is a suggestion. Please let me know if you're unable to separate this item, or if you decide to delete the item.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet*  I noted one spelling error.  [Reoder]  Should be: [Reorder]

*Star* My Rating.  4.5. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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JACE

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