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Non-Qualified Community Recognition  [E]
Community Recognition Details has Lists of Non-Qualified Merit Badges and Awardicons.
by the last cicada
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi the last cicada .

I'm Polter-JACE: Cruising ... , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Non-Qualified Community Recognition"  as a submission for the "WDC L'il Helper Contest" .

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. Thank you for taking time to create this How-To article. This this a topic that I would like to add to my "The File Cabinet"  (FC) project. There are so many small aspects of WDC that are taken for granted. Yet many members, especially Newbies, need these helpful tips.

I like the use of screenshots. It's so much easier to understand than by writing a long-hand version of a diagram.

You need a short introductory paragraph explaining why non-qualified community recognition is important. What is the difference between qualified and non-qualified (beyond the obvious)?

I admit to having a hard time accessing the CRD table. Your explanation where to access it was not very clear to me. I suspect others will have trouble finding it as written. You wrote:

*Note* The CRD Table is available from your full handle signature and also from your Portfolio Tab's signature in your Porfolio Tab.

I had to click on the actual CR number below my Name in the BioBlock to access the CRD. The CR number under my Name located above the Navigation menu didn't work. Nor did right- or left-clicking on my Name.

Looking at your bullets below, and now knowing what I was looking for, I was able to follow your instructions to find the CRD table. It can be accessed from a Link to Member (Basic) and Link to Member in "Recognition" Format.

I think a new member would have a hard time following these instructions as written. I also believe your How-To will be a great asset to the FC. At the present time, I don't have a ready solution for making this item easier to follow. I would ask you if you could streamline it a bit, and add the introduction.

If you haven't the time or inclination to massage it further, please consider transferring this item to me. I'll work on it as I'm able, and when it's included in the FC, it will be credited to you. I'll reimburse the transfer costs.

There's no set deadline if you work on it; just please don't forget it.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* Place any references listed in your item at the bottom. It's distracting if posted in the middle.    

         *Bullet* Misspelling, second Portfolio:  ... your Portfolio Tab's signature in your Porfolio Tab.  

*Star* My Rating.  4.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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JACE

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