This is a good poem with a lot of beautiful imagery. I sort of picture the feather in the movie "Forrest Gump" when reading this. How it travels and winds up going through a lot. I love the nature images that are set up in this (the sun, leaf, creek, ice and snow). It provides a great visual picture of each of the season.

Technically your Poem is developed very nicely. It has a great rhyme scheme and rhythm to it making it very easy to read through. It also opens with some great alliteration with "feather fall". Nicely written!



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