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Feelings and Emotions Open in new Window. [E]
I dont know what to say about this piece, it just happened......
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and happy account anniversary!

What a fine and simple rambling. You have written in almost a stream of consciousness manner, without any clear theme, yet it all fits together well and flows smoothly from couplet to couplet.

The meter and thoughts have a song-like quality to them, as you promise love and goodwill to those close to you. I enjoy a good picturesque poem; this is something I might have written down and committed to memory at a younger age.

As a sidenote, I would recommend using size 4 font to ensure readability across devices. Other than that I have no suggestions for changes.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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