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The Highlands of Scotland Open in new Window. [E]
If you haven't witnessed these Scotish hills, you are missing out.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings and happy account anniversary!

I enjoyed reading this poem. It describes the Scottish highlands in simple terms and draws us to consider the wars and great losses that have happen there centuries ago.

I was surprised to see the rhyming couplets here; you did a good job with the meter and flow. I did feel as though some of the word choices were too simplistic or forced or trite. But I’m no expert on poetic forms; if given the option I would probably go for free verse most of the time.

For this reason I don’t usually have much to offer to “correct” poems; as long as one has poured their heart into the creation, I don’t care a whole lot how it’s written. Poetry for me is a highly subjective art form.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Smile* *Heartb*


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