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Given: Feb 9, 2024 at 5:07pm
Length: 834 Characters |
834 w/o WritingML
Interesting start. I'm the kind who does read the introduction or prologue too. Love the voice. Not about me, it's about her. Valerie grew up abnormal. Gifted but looks grew uglier. Started skipping grades at fourth grade. Went to fifth grade instead. She got bullied often and there were teachers who punished the bullies. Then, chapter one, she met Drew who didn't think the same as the others. I see there are problems and deep bond relationship that can develop between the two of them. The ice cream is just a start.
Nice details throughout. Well balanced. No spelling or grammar errors found. The focus is well thought through. Valerie struggles getting bullied at school but is a wiz on her schoolwork. I like how Drew made her say "Nothing wrong with me." To convince her she isn't ugly. Good job and keep up the good work!
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