Greetings and happy account anniversary!

This is a picturesque poem, with a carefully built and interesting rhyme scheme. At first I felt as though the meter was a little bit forced and stilted, but then I read it again and it flows pretty well.

The words you chose convey the imagery nicely and show us the diversity of people enjoying the ice rink.

I don't usually have much to say about poetry, as I'm not an expert on metric forms or anything. I know a good poem mainly by instinct, and I like this.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing


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