This Poem does a great job of making me visualize Springtime. It feels vibrant with Mother nature coming to life. There is a lot of personification and metaphors in this poem. The way things are described makes me think of light and earth as lovers as well as earth / nature as a woman coming to life in the spring.

The Poem shines best with its descriptions. They really paint some vivid pictures... "Spring's seeds scattering and the firmament's aglow stand out".

In terms of wordplay this poem has some great alliteration "beguiling beauty in the second line "Light loosens his (yearly) virgin lover" leading into the second stanza. I also love some of the word choices "Verdant, firmament and slumber really make this poem pop. Great writing.



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