Greetings and happy account anniversary!

A grim and chilling tale of a ragtag family of vampires who meet their demise. Your writing flows well, bringing us clear descriptions and imagery that sets the scenes nicely.

I don’t have anything in particular to suggest; perhaps you might want to make a note of which contest you entered it into. I like the Verdana font, but I usually suggest using size 4 to ensure readability across devices.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing


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