Hi, Genipher , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "It's the End of the World as We Know It " , because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with nothing outside the darkness. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like this part because it was a happy ending.

Final thoughts: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this story, because they revealed the speaker's personality.