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 Serpent lies... Open in new Window. [E]
How do you begin to explain something so reality shattering?
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Review by slongentl Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Standing against darkness all alone is a different kind of feeling."for your yolk is hollow...and your bowels constructed" Strange to be hollow inside but obstructed at the same time.What an interesting concept. I loved the battle of the night to awake with the light... absolute genius I think. Very interesting write. I was hoping to read a bit more of the darkness before the light shown through. It's not a suggestion it's a thought I had as I finished up the read. Good write my friend.

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